yep I've had those moments... I really liked the beginning, twisting a once sweet nursery rhyme into your own. very good. "Take me on your wings/ Soaring before death swings" i liked that particular part, and what followed. i can hear the violins in the background, as the beginning has electric guitar. that's just what i get. i will continue reading, i like your work.

~shadow

p.s. welcome to my favs.