You have to look for the beauty, even if it dosn't want to be found. It's there. And if you really can't find it, try making some of your own.

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beautiful. I love it! omg I was just pondering the same idea these past view days. Only, I want to write of supernatural things and sadness but love following through in the end. I should think I'm so lucky because I've never experienced real pain or trauma. But then I suppose we (humans) are so facinated by what we don't know. So in a way you are blessed with the knowing of these horrors and cursed in knowing ONLY negativity you wish to escape while I'm blessed with a comfortable life style and cursed in knowing nothing of the real life in which I long to expose in my writing. Oh jeez.. I'm rambling. Actually, I quite like it. No poem on fictionpress has ever made me so enthusiastic and I've never submitted a review so long. I'm just glad someone out there understands even if our situations are a tad different. Awesome job.really got me thinking as you can tell by the novel of a review I just typed up.

Conflict, internal conflict! Very interesting topic...This kind of poem doesn't appear so often...please continue! Your poems are absolutely incredible!

That poem is so true. I've discovered a lot of talent on this site. Thanks for reviewing my poem, I absolutely love your poems!