Rather well written, but amazingly depressing. Especially the last lines. I love the words themselves, but the feeling just makes me want to curl up in a corner somewhere and have someone hold me and tell me it'll be alright...

Later...

Wow...it is so sad and tragic...I could just sit here and reread it until I fall asleep. It has a bit of hope in it though, and makes me feel agitated for some strange reason...

Superb!

I love the ending. Beautifully sad, lovely emotion. Wow, what worthless reviews I give.

ANNA

this is very good.really like it. it is beautifully written

this is good. i really like it.can you review mine?