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| FictionPressPenName 2005-10-30 ch 1,  | abuseWeird, but kind of cool. I liked it. Keep writing! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuse(5,7,5) Huge wave,—swift tumbled, Breathless knocked me flat on sand,— Silent as death's breath. (5,7,5) Quickened rumba beat, In between between tumbador's sound,— African sunshine. (5,7,5) Birth and death,—mile stones,— With small triumphs and short days,— Moonshine nightingale. (5,7,5) Cut and scarred brown skin,— Frail summer's receptacle,— Winter's brittle snow. (5,7,5) Cherish hate and love,— Green Spring and Red Autumn glee,— Snow owl hoots,—full moon. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseGets me thinking! Powerful haiku. Write on! ~Anna~ |