That. Was good.

It was a poem except it was in fiction form and if it had been a poem it would've been like a story.

There were some unclear bits but I don't care. It was still amazing. YOu describe it so well and it makes so much sense. All your names, like the Place, or Here, or There, or Creatures, or the Insanes, and the Sanity drying off you... I loved it all. This is going on my favorites list.

Very vivid details, and very insane. The only part I didn't really understand at all was the part about holding the gun to your head and pulling the triger. I'm not sure if that was figurative or real, because he is certainly not dead. This was a very different way of portraying suicide (at least I think that's what this was about)