gorgeous, just gorgeous

Perfect ending; just brings everything together. Brava!

Wow. This is great. The images it paints, awesome. Very foamy. Haha. Let's see... It has a pretty good flow, and the wording, the personifications, etc. etc. are great. Sorry, my brain is mush right now.

One thing though. The flow kind of breaks in these lines:

"Your love flowing as streams of red/ And I see you extend your hands away"

The wording in the second line is kind of iffy. The "And" doesn't seem really necessary, and "extending your hands... away?" Away. Hm.

But all in all, it's a great poem, a great read, etc. etc.