Sweet! And I totally agree! It's like "hey, I'll just sit here and do nothing even if I have a chance!" It bugs me! But let's not get into that! Awesome poem! MyMorbidRomance

Despite the fact that I hate questions in poems, I will say that it worked nicely with this particular poem. I like the subtle imagery that you create as well. However, "It does me good" just doesn't sound right to me. Though the use of the "world" "me" "us" is a nice ending for the poem.