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| KarlaMarie 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuse**, this is brilliant. WoW shawn i really like this one it is amazing. your talent in writing has certainly grown. i love it!i was for a moment, lost for words. better now ;) i like it how you present your idea it is thrown out there presenting the mockery of which they (the us) have made themselves into. thank you for writing that i havent enjoyed a piece of poetry for a while now.always and foreverKarlaMarie |
| Bernita Bean 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuse...horrid...completely horrid, but I like it. Not the poetry, that makes it terrible, dear, but just the picture in my mind. You were right to rate it for imagery. But I applaud you for it. Much Love, Cy the Kat |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseinteresting idea~~ neat to see from a soldier's POV~ good work keep writing! |