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Reviews For: Tears for the unkown soldier

KarlaMarie
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuse**, this is brilliant. WoW shawn i really like this one it is amazing. your talent in writing has certainly grown. i love it!i was for a moment, lost for words. better now ;)

i like it how you present your idea it is thrown out there presenting the mockery of which they (the us) have made themselves into. thank you for writing that i havent enjoyed a piece of poetry for a while now.always and foreverKarlaMarie
Bernita Bean
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuse...horrid...completely horrid, but I like it.

Not the poetry, that makes it terrible, dear, but just the picture in my mind.

You were right to rate it for imagery.

But I applaud you for it.

Much Love, Cy the Kat
mizu no kokoro
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuseinteresting idea~~ neat to see from a soldier's POV~ good work

keep writing!
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