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| Drizit 2005-10-29 ch 1,  | abuseWhat the hell? Okay i sound rude suddenly going like that but its better than WTF so.. i don't get this poem. I get the obvious image of a body in a bag though. |
| AnthonyByakko 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThanks for your review. To answer your question about the religion of the text, it is Buddhist. http://w.wildmind.org/meditation/mantra/avalokitesvara.html As for this piece here, I personally like it, but I'm not very well-read in this style so I don't want to give an uninformed critique. A piece with a lot of contrast. |
| Aki 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseMalas nak sign in. Tak Faham lahh! |
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm quite sure what to say. First I think you're saying one thing, but then I change my mind. A powerful swirl of emotional bullets, shooting off one idea and then a next. It could mean so many things, or so few, and... Yeah. It's just very strong. |
| darkdemonsunday 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abusethis was interesting . . . what does it mean exactly? You're on quite a writing run these past few days, aren't ya? |