What the hell? Okay i sound rude suddenly going like that but its better than WTF so.. i don't get this poem. I get the obvious image of a body in a bag though.

Thanks for your review.

To answer your question about the religion of the text, it is Buddhist.

http://w.wildmind.org/meditation/mantra/avalokitesvara.html

As for this piece here, I personally like it, but I'm not very well-read in this style so I don't want to give an uninformed critique. A piece with a lot of contrast.

Malas nak sign in.

Tak Faham lahh!

I'm quite sure what to say. First I think you're saying one thing, but then I change my mind. A powerful swirl of emotional bullets, shooting off one idea and then a next. It could mean so many things, or so few, and... Yeah. It's just very strong.

this was interesting . . . what does it mean exactly? You're on quite a writing run these past few days, aren't ya?