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Nocturnal Darkness 2006-07-16 . chapter 1
A very abstract piece...very abstract. The pitch of an insane salesman, an aggravated gunman, and a mute guy. An odd yet interesting concept...and carried out well, if I may say so. It's short, but it gets the point across nicely. Keep up the good work.
lordmasterkris 2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Um. . .Cool, I think.

You did a great job of capturing the atmosphere. I can't really describe how it made me feel, it was creepy and tense, then the guy started talking about stop signs? It did seem sorta dream like at that point.

But still, you must have some weird dreams.
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