this is really good!

this poem is amazing. i love your work. it's really wonderful and you have gotten to be so brilliant at what you do. i want to print it out but then i would have to look at it every day and remember what i don't have. good luck and all that jazz

Good isn't the word...brilliant? For something different, it was an excellent piece of work! I liked it, even if it's a different pace from you, it was still fantastic! - Great!

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brilliant. it's a change of pace showing definate growth from some of your earlier works.

It is good. You have good imagery skills and your point is clear. This makes for good poetry. My favorite line is " With one pull of my index finger I set myslef free;" It's so simple but meaningful, it kinda grabs you and shakes you. I like your satyle, could you take a look at some of my poems? Thanx... - SHW