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simpleplan13 2005-11-04 . chapter 1
well welcome back

With her mothers name inscribed in it... mother's

i dunno... i like the idea and the sunset thing is very cool... the ball thing is a tad odd and i dunno the lines bohter me.. i feel liek some are too short and others are too long. but that's just me
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