It's really really good. You're an amazing writer.

Wow, some really strong imagery here. "Ribbons of flesh"

Nice capitalisation of "Faith".

great poem, keep writing!

I won't say anything cause I'll just end up getting in a worse mood. So, this poem is awesome in it's evil/twisted/not fair way.

-freak from the corner

You are an amazing author, great work!

i like how you personified faith very well written

keep writing!

i'm glad that's still no longer your dream.

I know what you did! Stop it! ok so I'm being a hypocrite...

I love the poem.