|Reviews for Tears of the Sun|
| S0ulSearching 2/26/06 . chapter 1
((hey _ long time no reviews on my end...I'm sorry...)) Anyways, this was awsome, I see it fitting a few situations and I like that it reminds me of a few different things. Powerful and elegant language. Keep it up.-pammy-x3
| Haberdasher 2/16/06 . chapter 1
very moving, your note at the bottom made me read through it again and see it in a new light. at first it reminded me of Lord of the rings... (hehe) love the line 'intricate rain of faith'. lovely words.- haberdasher
| sTrive 11/8/05 . chapter 1
kool beans... (that would be a compliment. _)
| BJ Worth 11/3/05 . chapter 1
beautifully tragic. But then love never dies...
| ArchDemonNotion 11/1/05 . chapter 1
I liked it. I have to admit I'm lost to poetry because I've been doing Taoism and well it tells you to kind of ignore everything we know so I don't know what abstract things are and what not. I liked the words and how they flowed but it didn't give me much of a picture.
| InspirASIAN 11/1/05 . chapter 1
aww...that is sad. but its beautiful and amazing and im so jealous of ur talent lol.
| Rozlin 11/1/05 . chapter 1
i'm sorry to hear about your friend... the sadness definately showed in this piece... it had a certain eloquence to it as well...
| Perilous Escapist 10/31/05 . chapter 1
Very sad tone. It can be challenging to give poetry an emotional impact on the reader, but you've done an impeccable job. My favourite line is
"Into the forlorn downpour of goodbye".
Very nice, keep writing.
| SayIt'sWrong 10/29/05 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful and the words are brilliant. Excellent poem! Well done and thank you so much for your reviews. Sorry I've been so slow in getting back to you! Keep up the amazing writing! QueenVixta
| bjw 10/29/05 . chapter 1
This holds a deep sadness that is really touching...each line must have been so heartfelt! I love the first stanza, it's so precious and sad and lingering. Oh, "Caste away" should be "cast away". I do hope you're feeling better, keep smiling!:)
Thanks so much for the review!
| lengg 10/27/05 . chapter 1
Very beautifully written poem...Its very nice. iliked it alot, emotions were expressed really strongly.
| Elphie Thropp 10/26/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Keep it up!
| Pure Autumn 10/26/05 . chapter 1
this is good i like the imagery
| simpleplan13 10/26/05 . chapter 1
beautiful.. I love hte quote.. awesome poem
btw thanks for telling me which of my poems was your favorite.. I appreciate it a lot
| AikiChaos 10/26/05 . chapter 1
Exquisite. I simply can't describe the feeling it invokes for me even through I study literature.