nice. i like it alot i understand it perfectly...you are very good at this...i like the part where it says 'lost memories i can't ever take back. tears i can never hold back.'it reminds me of some period of time in my life. very nicely done you get a hug.

The rhyming seems a little bit forced, but overall it has a nice rhythm to it. I like the idea. Great job.

i love the whole stacking idea.. very cool.. thanks for your review!