Reviews for Life On The Fritz

Damaged 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abuseAwesome poem!! I loved reading it!
Yokotaashi 2005-11-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great show of emotion, pure and simple, no cleverness, but great writing, keep going!
lullabyy child 2005-10-24 ch 1,	abuseVery deep. I wish I could write as well as you do.
A-wolf-called-Skya 2005-10-23 ch 1,	abuseVery deep! definitely good. suggestion for your title: Fall To Pieces (maybe?) i really don't have any critism to offer. like you said, a good poem, just bad title ;) if your willing, could drop a review on my poem, "A Thousand Times"? much appreciated if you do :) Keep writing! -Rachel Morgan.