I just had a thought.
Please alert the local news crew.

Does it really matter if you completely understand the meaning behind words you string together, if they sound good and give awesome imagery?

That was more of a question, wasn't it? Oh well. I like this. Alot. And now I don't feel so lonely in my confusing of my own work sometimes.

amazing talent for words!

(ps: yea I know Kasatonov is Russian...lol I'm a soon to be Russian/Eastern European/Scanidavian history major! lol I was just really lazy at the moment and couldn't think of any Greek names except Gianakopolous (that's to a friend of my grandma's..it's her last name) and I was watching my fave movie Miracle (American hockey team against the Russians) and I'm seriosuly hooked on Russians! lol, so even though Nikos is SUPPOSE to be Greek, he just happened to get a Russian last name since the author was feeling terribly lazy...I blame the senioritis lol thanks for commenting anyways!)

hah, its interesting.little black leg. that reminds me of a pug and i have no idea why.

anyhow, intruiging enough and your profile kind of is eerie to me. we have a lot of things in common (uhm, in that non-stalker hopefully not creepy sounding way)JTHM is sahweet. hah. wow, i am just so happy tonight.anyhow, your work is interesting.

Haha. I love the quirky abstractness of this!^^ The bits and pieces of the different images...everything kind of reminded me of a hapless little beetle among dewy green leaves and fresh blue sky, crawling after his fellow beetles on a precariously thin twig.xD Must be the part about the tiny black leg. For some strange reason I really enjoyed this!! Oh it's "thin" not "thing" isn't it? Well, nice work, keep writing!

Lovely images, like the flow of it as well. Title doesn't matter when this is the content!

doesn't matter what it's about, it sounds gorgeous!

Love the absractness, but it almost borders on just a bunch of lines stuck together. So, you might want to think about trying to link them a bit more.

This is not waht I was expecting from this peice, judging (as i probably shouldn't have) by the title. The formatting, (whether intentional or no,) was very well put together. The end left things hanging in a matter of fact way, (good, bad?) I think I liked it. I don't know your style very well, so I can't tell. My cynical self is always leaning towards you're in experianced and did it unintenitionally, but then again, I don't hitnk I even read your profile. Ah well. I'll take it as you actually know what your're doing, which, I supose you do. In any case, lovely peice. I think the name adds to the mystery about the whole bit. But a new title may be in order...your choice. Mayhaps some other readers will be sucked into your chaming (if not untrue) lyrical phrases simply by the false representation. Cheers.

Shiny and oh so very lovely. I feel as though I relate to this somehow...even though I am not entirely sure what it means... Great job!

~dancingintheshadows

Thanks for reviewing my poem. It is kinda disturbing but thats why i like it. This is a good poem.

Anytime you need/want a review just review something of mine and you'll get review from me.