damn that is good. that is the best one-shot ive ever read. u r one of my fav authors! U ROCK

Just for the record, that actually made me cry. Love it

This was such a well written short story. So beautiful, sweet and yet so sad. It's wonderful. I love it.

Wow. That was... well, since there are no words that can really describe the magnitude of its greatness, wonderful, amazing, perfect, etc. etc. etc. This is, by far, the best piece of writing I have ever read. Yes, out of all the books I've read, out of The Historian, out of After 20 Years, out of Song of the Lioness, out of Uglies, out of any of Maya Angelou or Edgar Allen Poes works, out of all that. It is amazing. Just read through it once more for a few grammatical and clearity errors that your spell-check didn't catch. :) That is an amazing short story, and I love it. Keep writing. You're amazing.

That was so sad and so good at the same time! I love your writing :)

hey.. your story's great!! i love it!

Aww, that was so sweet and amazing. I love it.