This caught my eye because of your interesting use of capitilization, which for some reason I found intriguing. I noticed the clever (well, I think it's clever) use of capitals in one of your poems, but was eager to see how you used it in a story.

I wasn't disappointed. In my experience, a person tends to either have a real knack for poetry or stories, and not both, but guess you're the exception to the rule.

Anyways, loved the original format of your "characters", and I can't really find the words to describe why. Point being: I like.

I am guessing this is a one-shot, and brilliant it is. I think it's adorable how you gave each emotion and all a personality. It's too cute! Reminds me of...Oh i don't know...norton juster or something. Your grammar's good too. The only quibble I had was that you stopped capitolizing so many words in the last few paragraphs so it was a bit inconsistant. But other than that, awesome little piece of writing. Keep it up.

I Heart this.It makes me feel Warm and Fuzzy inside.

:)