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no one of consequence 2006-09-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. That really pulled me in. You had a lot (a LOT) of detail, which I like. Nice job. Please don't take my lack of comments for lack of appreciation.
LiNdSaY.AP 2006-08-21 ch 1,	abuseHoly crap, I am entirely impressed and intrigued! I REALLY hope you update this, I've been searching for a good vampire read for a long time. Your style is very good, metaphors and similies and all that are perfect. As for plot ideas, you could either go with maybe taking the story from the narrator's perspective, or maybe the mystery man. Or both, even. Either way, I hope you'll alert me when you update this. As for "Kiss of Death" thanks for reading it. It's not based off of Garth Nix's stuff, I just have a weird fascination/fear of death, and I got an idea for it. I've had a couple other people ask me the same thing. I wonder if you could tell me what reminds you of that series, unless it's just the topic of death. In that case I can see how it relates. I don't think I've ever come across any other books about death Himself. Or Herself. Anyway, thanks again and PLEASE update this!!
The Preg Scholar 2006-08-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, it was an interesting start. I would definitely read this story if you continued it, and I think a lot of other people would as well because the summary was very catchy (nice work with that!). However, and I don't want to sound harsh, the writing was a bit overdramatic. Calling 'the stranger' attractive is one thing, calling him 'michelangelo's David only better' and a 'dark angel' and a 'tragic hero' is going over the top. And I don't really understand what the Mona Lisa/Helen of Troy simile is supposed to mean (but that might just be me, not you). Okay, I'm sorry if that sounded too mean, but on a bright note I would love to read this story if you decide to continue it, just cut back the overdramatic metaphors and adjectives:)
deuteriuM Xtreme 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseAh, I've read 'Something Wicked This Way Comes' before [by Ray Bradbury]. I thought it was.. chilling in a hidden sort of way. And for this tale I suppose you can add more descriptions to build up the tension, or anything else you want to bring out. Spelling out the numbers would be a plus too. [either that or I'm just picky. >
Alexiana 2006-01-22 ch 1,	abuseDUDE! MORE! um, please? I liked it. I thought you did well with the build up. I don't know if I'd leave it as a short story because of the flat build up/climax/end but I totally think you could make this work! I think you have a talent for writing nonboring stories. You can write and it doesn't sound like you just came out of some fifth grade english class. I'd read a book you wrote... hmm... i should probably go back and review the other things of yours I've read, huh?
mirre 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice, does the book exsist in reality, I've heard that title before? You can continue with it if you like, it's a good beginning.

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