it's a very interesting story. i liked it because sometimes i feel exactly like that and the way you put it down is just perfect.
great story!

Aw.. I thought that was pretty sweet at the ending. Great job on this, I really liked it.
-alanna

It was good, though you sorta jumped around a bit. But it had a feel-good ending that warms the heart.

I really like these. Very good. I love the first one's ending, and this one. Very good and to the point. Keep up the good work :)
Faith

i love jell-o! lol. anyway i like this. really short and simple but it had alot to say.

Ooh, whoa! Are you planning on continuing this. In my opinion, this would make a great one-shot. It's already powerful as it is. Bravo.

Wow...this is amazing. This is exactly how I've felt for the past 5 months...except the fact that no one's come to save me yet.

Hey, you started writing again too! I'm just getting back into the flow. Right now it's nothing though.