Ew...thats not what i expected at all...Thats slightly deranged and a lot emo but good um twist on a firytale opening

twisted.

really twisted.

but i just had to read it again.

i can imagine a friend of mine would be very intruiged by this :)

Omg..that is so f*cking scary! PHSYCO HUSBAND! AH. But still, very creative, nice work. ;)

Ahh! that was wonderfull/horrible. i like it its twisted very much like myself, any who very well written.

Lol, funny entrance. But very cool overall, good work.

"He wanted her heart to be his forever." Makes sense to me.

This is...interesting...creative but kinda...um...disturbing. I imagine that was what you were aiming for huh? Well...it's well written...but...uhh...yeah, keep up the good work.