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| A. J. Krautwurst 2006-09-27 ch 1,  | abusethis is a powerful piece. that's the best word i can use to describe it. the language is just powerful. i like your use of parentheses here. |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abusewow, i really like the fast-paced rhythm of this...and that last line really made me pause for a while in a positive way...nice job... truly yours... |
| Lucid Nonsense 2006-01-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat imagery for both, beautiful and unique. Very descriptive. Good job. |
| perdita's kiss 2005-11-04 ch 2, | abuseto attempt to praise this...I'd never ever be able to do this justice. It's truly amazing. |
| lackluster 2005-11-02 ch 2, | abusethis is the better one, i think. i love the feeling in it. |
| smile persephone 2005-10-30 ch 2, | abuseGorgeous. Both of them. The second is my favorite by far; I love the stream of conscienceness of it. Makes me smile. |
| Project Empty 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseLove this poem, beautiful words, comes into my mind as murmurs.Style is fantastic, very e.e. cummings. keep writing,-Empty |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, great diction. |
| Elizabeth Ebony 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseUtterly amazing.SO abstract and original...speechless. E.Ebony |
| ThisCut-UpAngel 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseIncredibly beautiful! I loved the last line! Bravo! |
| perdita's kiss 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abusewow, that was brilliant! I love it! >Dance Girl Dance |
| lackluster 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abusethat's a very unique title to have, 'goddess of fireflies'. i love the idea. |
| WiredWords 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abusea mood is definitely created by this piece. It's sort of eerie and far away feeling, yet the imagery is still there. well done. and thank you for reviewing my work. I appreciate it |
| GypsyMothra 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I love the "goddess of fireflies" Great imagery. |