Reviews for Passions of a Stoner: Ode to the Fall Down Boys

Reviews For: Passions of a Stoner: Ode to the Fall Down Boys

sweethalflife 2005-12-15 ch 1,	abuseit really is a well written story ms. v was very wrong to impose forced censorship on this "He was Mormon, but man he never gave a **." one of the best lines in the story, i think
ThE1337oNe 2005-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery good, that of a teacher dosnt know what she is talking about. As much as comes up, there is another very educated word to folow it.
IdiotMaru 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abuseReally? My creative writing teacher would have said it was awesome. Whoever your teacher is, they really haven't gotten out from that rock they're living under yet to realize there is a whole other world out there. Gah--sorry for ranting, ignorance ** me off. But I love the way you wrote this--it seemed laid back and truthful, like nothing was put in for effect. Good job, I say.
Faithless Juliet 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abuse[teachers; I swear, they should be band from the public school district.] I like the abstract storytelling of this; the folk-ish narritive, funky and edged but with a twist of reality to imbolden it. The rebellious part of me wants to tell you to just turn it in the way that it is and except the fate that this "teacher" of yours is going to give you, but its never good to fail Creative Writing. I say do what feels right to you, turn it in or not, its good work, weather this "teacher" thinks it is or not- honestly these are people who we're educated on bad literature, they wouldn't know good storytelling if it bit them in the **. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.
Ssinjin Nilah 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abuseeven though your teacher didn't accept it, I loved this story. I thought some of the things you wrote were just the ** most beautiful words ever. the dialogue is shaky and hard to read in some parts. stupid teachers not accepting what we write. like what they have to say is anymore interesting.

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