O.O OMG!! IT'S CHAPTER 10 ALREADY!! I WANNA READ MORE! XD My, how time can fly when you're reading something...

I like story... how you update soon... the chapter with the hentai thing was HILARIOUS! IT WAS LMAO!

CONTINUE!!

Ah I know how it feels to be uninspired when it comes to drawing manga--it hits close to home but I dont usually work on my stories with anyone else. I cant wait to read the rest! sounds like a good story--

Taco

Thanks for the review and thanks for standing up for me about the copyright thing...people can be so dumb. Thanks :D Hope to see more kick ** stories

*gasp* is chitose moving on in life? will she fall in love w/ this new chic? omg thatd be like some weird love square or sumthing...i liked it tho...vry intrestin to see life in Chitose's p.o.v...keep it up! ^_^

First off, I admire that you are writing a story about love between two women. But I of course have some critiques that you should fix. You are losing your touch, if you ever had one, I'm afraid.

Once again, you borderline on no plot (or is there a plot at all?). From what I can tell, it is all about winning some contest, the girls win it, then there is a whole jumble of relationship problems. And for the first eight or nine chapters, you have stuck with your Rule of Threes, something that you have used throughout most of your stories; Basically, there are three main characters and that is about it.

Also, I've spotted a few grammatical errors through this. You use far too many fragments of sentences to suit me.

And this may just be a personal thing, but if one of my girlfriends or lovers bickered that much or was that oblivious, I wouldn't tolerate them. I'm surprised that you had Chitose like Umeki that long. She must be a very tolerant character. But then again, you made her out to be quick-tempered. Which is it?

All in all, I'm disappointed with the way this turned out. The summary made this story out to be better than it was.

Good day

...AW!

Chitose and Ai...that's so cute!

I just wonder how Umeki will react if they hook up. *cue drama*

Anyway, great chapter! The banter between Chitose (my favorite! Squee!) and Ai was so cute. It's almost like they're made for each other! *hearts*

Who's a George Bush fan, anyway? I hate the man (evil simpleton gr)

Update when you can, K-chan! ^^

--Tobira, signed and sealed

Ja-jan!! You've got a new reader now. Truth be told, I'd seen your story around but I hadn't read it because (I'm a dumb **) of some unfathomable reason.

Oh well. Whatever.I like your writing style. It's... the sort of style I'm very fond of, and would like to write in myself, but just somehow... don't. Because it doesn't suit my stories, or something.

I like your characters. Gotta admit, I also am reminded of Gravitation, although more by your characters than anything else. But that's enough about that. Because I'm supposed to be talking about your work, not Maki-sensei's.

I love Umeki's weird little quirks (The chewing and everything) and Minako's **-holeness. Ai seems interesting, but I'll have to wait until she's been around and developed for a little longer before I make any decisions. Hoho.

I've read your profile and decided that I like you as well as your story. You're definitely a my-type-of-person. I'm sorry. That sounded really weird, didn't it? Oh well. Hopefully it doesn't matter, as long as you've scored yourself another fan, right? Right?

Um.. yes. Sure. I'll be looking forward to seeing whatever you put out next! Ehe.

T_T Sorry I haven't been able to review in a while. This chapter was totally awesome tho! * sque * Comments here: Yesh, I too hate country, Yesh, I do love techno and Yesh, I do loath G. W. Bush with a deep and unspoken passion. I am beginning to develoup the same hate of this Ai person. She's just the kind of girl that I TEND TO WANT TO KILL. :: glares suspiciously at K-Chan's evil chapter :: Anyways I luv the story! I want updates. YAY!! Your stories are always luffly Kchan.

nina-chan

Ahh, Ai Reed is a very intersting addition~

Ahh! I missed three chapters! Oh well, the wait made them (if it's even possible) better than if I read them when they came out. o.O Lotsa pronouns, confusing methinks. Will we get a chapter from Minako's or Ai's POV? That'd be interesting... I can't wait for the next one! =D

just like uke...i am slow...but i think i get that he hides his feelings for her..maybe? yay! a day in the life of chitose is next! :) granny kusenegai..LoL...hurray for slight romance! keep it up!

Haha awesome! Throw in that nice little twist at the end! XDD Man, this is my favourite chapter so far. Editors sound scaryy xD

This was my favorite chapter so far! .:: claps ::. In the beginning, it was really funny. It acutally made me smile. I never smile. Usually I smile fakely on Christmas when somebody gives me a piece of junk. But this was actually a smile thing. It was really weird. Lol. Usually your stories make my eyes widen or my heart beat raise into some kind of random drumming. 0_o * my face reading K-Chan's horror* I can't wair for chapter 10!! {whoa... chapter 10 already...?}

nina-chan

Wow...That editor-granny-lady reminds me of my mother *shutter*

The ending was a bit...wow. Minako's acting a bit like a prick and Umeki's trying to be nice?! *shrugs* Whatever works huh? I liked it! But...gah, poor Chitose! *cries*

Can't wait for the next update, K-chan!

--Tobira, signed and sealed

awe... i feel bad for chitose! umeki is soo stupid! itd be interestin if some sort of triangle formed...lol..hopefullu umeki's experiences with working on the manga gets better... i

+points at last part+ OH KINKY. +is slapped+

Oh...I'd like it if the fic became shoujo-ai :D Then this would be my first time reading it!