Whoa. Brutal. It leaves me dazzled and with a strong disgust for the human race and an even stronger desire to wish them all dead. Great, heartwrenching work.

this stiry was amazing yet predictible, I could see what amamnda's fate was a mile away. this may a good prlougue to a story so it would be really cool if u continued

Wow, that was wonderful. I could sense to was coming as soon as Andrew came into the picture, but it was written wonderfully nonetheless.