Perceptions. It kept me reading all the way through. Beautiful.

So vivid. . . electrifying. Great detail and interesting topic. Very nice!

This reminds me of emo's and rockshows... like the rockshows, not the emo's. but i do like this poem, good job.

This has a moving rolling uniqueness to it. You've created the scene and the feelings that emanate off the scene so well. Excellent work.

Hm...this could be a really interesting poem; about people on stage whose music and performance seems odd, but they go through with it anyway. The work 'freak' distracted me a bit during it, it felt like you were making the situation a bit overly dramatic.

I don't think that makes any sense. The writing was good; I liked the no-sentance structure of it. I've never been able to write a no sentence poem, it's too hard! So bravo. Good job, keep writing.

Very powerful, very beautiful... (Although it's almost embarrassing to admit this in a written form that can be held against me, I almost cried.)

The closure was perfect, also. It really brought it all to a close, sort of leaves-the-ears ringing feeling.

Excellent, your title really draws people in. Well it drew me in at least...I am not a 'person'...lol. Great poem. Keep writing! You're great at it!

UCL

brilliant analogy and i love the context you've put it in. top job!

..and then you become one of the freaks.

good job.

Really cool - could picture it vividly. Excellent word choice as well! *applause*