|Reviews for in the limelight|
| C. F. Handle 10/23/06 . chapter 1
Perceptions. It kept me reading all the way through. Beautiful.
| My New Pen Name 4/5/06 . chapter 1
So vivid. . . electrifying. Great detail and interesting topic. Very nice!
| boys kiss girls 4/5/06 . chapter 1
This reminds me of emo's and rockshows... like the rockshows, not the emo's. but i do like this poem, good job.
| Moondog Dozier 2/14/06 . chapter 1
This has a moving rolling uniqueness to it. You've created the scene and the feelings that emanate off the scene so well. Excellent work.
| Chandra-Moon 12/19/05 . chapter 1
Hm...this could be a really interesting poem; about people on stage whose music and performance seems odd, but they go through with it anyway. The work 'freak' distracted me a bit during it, it felt like you were making the situation a bit overly dramatic.
I don't think that makes any sense. The writing was good; I liked the no-sentance structure of it. I've never been able to write a no sentence poem, it's too hard! So bravo. Good job, keep writing.
| Decollage 12/18/05 . chapter 1
Very powerful, very beautiful... (Although it's almost embarrassing to admit this in a written form that can be held against me, I almost cried.)
The closure was perfect, also. It really brought it all to a close, sort of leaves-the-ears ringing feeling.
| SinxWithxAxGrin 12/17/05 . chapter 1
Excellent, your title really draws people in. Well it drew me in at least...I am not a 'person'...lol. Great poem. Keep writing! You're great at it!
| Smoky Bear 12/11/05 . chapter 1
brilliant analogy and i love the context you've put it in. top job!
| poet tree 12/2/05 . chapter 1
..and then you become one of the freaks.
| I Found Myself At 24 10/28/05 . chapter 1
Really cool - could picture it vividly. Excellent word choice as well! *applause*