that is incredible.

the prose-like imagery was very intriguing for me to read.

i especially loved the line, "heart/skitter under my sleeve"

it's so raw and so...unique. nice job!

this reminds me of a quote i love:

anyone who thinks sunshine is pure happiness has never danced in the rain.

remember to take joy in small things that made you happy as a child...like dancing in the rain.

"And I feel my heart

Skitter under my sleeve

As I continue

With my stick figure masterpiece"

i LOVE that line! this whole piece is beautiful

Don't you just *love* rainstorms and free spirits? (hmm... that might have just given me inspiration)

good job on this )and thank you for the lovely reviews you've been giving me.

Wow. I really don't know what to say. This piece is just . . . wow. I love it! story favs Wow . . . just wow. It's so good and . . . I can't even describe how good it is. Another excellent job there!

May inspiration NEVER leave you wanting!

all my love,felicia

Favorite line: "Highlighting a four-letter word/Highlighting how I feel/About Mondays." I know what you mean. Sometimes Mondays just suck. I just thought it was really funny, that part. Great poem. Keep writing! :)

powerful. keep it up

's are never enough to describe what i felt when i read this..

O my bob! You write beautifully! I can't get over it. This was just..."awesome!" -my overused word..*sigh*- There were soo many lines that I truely really liked...and I definitly liked the whole.."the girl in the white dress dancing in the rain" kinda gave off this "innocent" vibe type thing. But you used some great descriptions too, I really felt like I knew exactly what the girl looked like. AH! I loved this. Def. *kw* you have some awesome talent!

britney

WOAH. I love it. SO beautiful. There were so many lines I loved. It sort of reminded me of StarGirl by Jerry Spinelli. That's a good book. Lol anyway it was phenominal and I loved it. I might just favorite it if I have room!

Great poem! this is excellent!

UCL

Beautiful poem - I love the rain. (You probably knew that.)

I can't pick out any favourite lines! I love them all. Beautiful descriptions, and lovely flow.

Fabulous poem! Keep writing!

fabulous poem, the scene is so well described, i can picture it. soop-oib!

Love this.

nice. i love it.