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oh "a 1,0 mistakes from now" is just ohsoperfect

you did an awesome job

truly yours...

incredible. the short lines at the end have such a huge impact. brilliant writing.

hey thanks for reviewing this is really amazing, keep it up!

Love! Oh, this is excellent. I love the way you've taken a childhood fairytale and twisted it slightly into something wonderfull and full of pretty words.

I'm not sure if I understand this, but hey, it's kinda bitter, a bit sour, but still, somehow (just somehow) very affectionate... almost "merciful"

aw. its so bitter sweet and longing.

I love this; that last line, and the whole Peter Pan reference. Such a fascinting metaphore for this piece, Peter Pan the epitome of boyhood; the only boy in the whole world who wasn't looking for a girl just for sex. Wonderful piece, amazing, I'm loving it.

Juliet.