|Reviews for Peter Pan|
| whatdotheydream 2/3/13 . chapter 1
| laughter at the funeral 2/12/08 . chapter 1
oh "a 1,0 mistakes from now" is just ohsoperfect
you did an awesome job
| Ebony Stars 11/12/05 . chapter 1
incredible. the short lines at the end have such a huge impact. brilliant writing.
| hotpoisonbloodmama 10/27/05 . chapter 1
hey thanks for reviewing this is really amazing, keep it up!
| evm 10/26/05 . chapter 1
Love! Oh, this is excellent. I love the way you've taken a childhood fairytale and twisted it slightly into something wonderfull and full of pretty words.
| Spiral Artist 10/26/05 . chapter 1
I'm not sure if I understand this, but hey, it's kinda bitter, a bit sour, but still, somehow (just somehow) very affectionate... almost "merciful"
| account not in use 10/26/05 . chapter 1
aw. its so bitter sweet and longing.
| Faithless Juliet 10/25/05 . chapter 1
I love this; that last line, and the whole Peter Pan reference. Such a fascinting metaphore for this piece, Peter Pan the epitome of boyhood; the only boy in the whole world who wasn't looking for a girl just for sex. Wonderful piece, amazing, I'm loving it.