I love this story so much!! I can't wait until you update. Fantastic work, lookign forward to more. Keep it up. :)Later, a-drop-of-rainx

Random Language time

Omni vicit amor et nos cedemos amori.Love conquers all things let us too give into love.

I like this story :3 It makes me happy.

update soon!

Easy going plot. Don't rush anything because the pace is good. Try to put in more descriptions, that certainly helps. Like...how Charles views Justin and vice versa, apart from their physical attributes. Other than that, I'd have to say if you don't update soon enough, I'd have to sic your characters on ya...And of course, by that, I meant I was joking...cheers, hun!

This is very well written so far. I am actually waiting patiently for the next chapter. You need to write it soon before my mind starts to eat itself. *smiles* Wish you the best on your future writing career.

~Ken

Cute start!

Mesha like ^_^ Dunno why though

wow, this is in first person! i cant write in first person so Great job for you!(not being sarcastic.) anyway, i really liked how you ended the chapter. please update soon!

p.s. i would apprecaite it if you read my story! thanks-Saleinaenachiya