Didn't i review this one? Anyway, ack, scary. Oh yeah and Shahrul aka Gory says hi and kirim salam and all.

Great job, as ever. The summary really struck me- amde me think of someone keeping a heart or something.

I like the way you set the poem, and I can emphasize with it well. =nod= Though you didn't exactly use a lot of 'imagery' words the reader can get quite a good picture from this. Well done!

pretty, pretty.

~* noelle

you just keep churning them out! I love this one. Very emotional. Again, that almost seems like a part of a song. . .

ack, scary

This is SO good. Im sitting here shivering. the "dripdripdrip" is fantastic use of onomatopeia (can't spell it) I guess it's reffering to Blood!? Really haunting. Keep it up! Love Immortal x

I like this one, a lot of anger and frustration.

very good work, great job!