Reviews for When I Have The Time

Drizit 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abuseDidn't i review this one? Anyway, ack, scary. Oh yeah and Shahrul aka Gory says hi and kirim salam and all.
s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-10-27 ch 1,	abuseGreat job, as ever. The summary really struck me- amde me think of someone keeping a heart or something. I like the way you set the poem, and I can emphasize with it well. =nod= Though you didn't exactly use a lot of 'imagery' words the reader can get quite a good picture from this. Well done!
poetic abortion 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abusepretty, pretty. ~* noelle
darkdemonsunday 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abuseyou just keep churning them out! I love this one. Very emotional. Again, that almost seems like a part of a song. . .
aki 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseack, scary
Autumn Dance 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is SO good. Im sitting here shivering. the "dripdripdrip" is fantastic use of onomatopeia (can't spell it) I guess it's reffering to Blood!? Really haunting. Keep it up! Love Immortal x
Viksy81 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI like this one, a lot of anger and frustration.
sunday night sky 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abusevery good work, great job!