This is gorgeous. I love everything about it. The words you chose are so perfect, and everything about it is just nice. I love it.

ha, the irony. nicely written, good choice of words... short but thought provoking. i like this.

xo - Rei

awesome

*smile*

you have such infectous poetry. I must say this is gorgeous. incredibly short but poignant. lovelovelove the title ["this is relief, not jealousy"]. you create a mesmerising mood and well depicted sense, but the irony in this is so sharp. love it.

~* noelle

this is relief not jelousy...love it. it tells so much, of a stale half-baked and bad relationship and the relief of being let go. i like it, as usual wonderful descriptions.

quite a bit of sarcasm/irony there.This is just lovely.Delicious,almost.Write on :)

E.Ebony

Love the irony here. Wonderful job.

I found this quite funny in like a dark, twisted kind of way.

-it’s a (pretend?) chopstick war of love&hate&/every impassive afternoon in between.- I love those lines!

And the ending! Those last three lines are gold!! I love that bitter sarcasm. This is quite a nice poem. Excellent, brain-twisting rhythm and a bitter little personality. I really enjoyed it.

Holy **. I love it!

so I’m a purer shade of his nasty, dirty:. smile.-Love that line; you create a mesmerizing mood in this piece.

Juliet.