But... how can you just leave it there? D:

Yeah, I know, story untouched for four years will probably never be finished. But I loved every word of what you wrote anyways.

Oh, dear. I just blasted through this entire thing and there's no more? I love this! It's geekalicious; one of the best, most original ideas I've seen in a long time.

Bwahahaha, this is hilarious! :D Computer love... literally.

You're a genius.

Wow, I read this so long ago, and I found it again when I was on the NaNoWriMo forums.

Hey! This is great. It's well written, informed and error-free. Hooray for good fiction!

And as an Alienware owner, I'd like to say you've done the computer justice.

Thank you!

~Angela

This IS geeky. But it's funny. I LOVE it, although I don't have time to read the whole thing.

Wow...this is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. I sense creative talent...

Bwaha, this is hysterical. So brilliant and unique. Ha, the whole networking thing, besides sounding a little kinky, *ahem* was very creative. Just the whole idea of using computers like that is genius. You must be very good with your technology, and clever too, the way you can twist those technological words around to replace the regular words and make them have the same meaning. You made me think of the firewall like a condom and computer viruses as STDs. Didn't think that would ever happen, haha.

Odd. Maybe PC could tell Mac why Alienware was so bad. Oh, lok at me, advising computors.

Sensual computoring! Oh!. A really great start.

Every computer has its personality, its good points and its flaws . . . fantastic job. The storyline is interesting and I love the Alienware, though I'm not sure why. And sorry for spelling 'especially' wrong in the last review.

I . . . love you.

It's hilarious! The concept is great, especialy considering the silly rivalry that goes on between PC users and Mac users (this from a staunch Macaholic, too).

Great job.

Wow, this is really good. The computers seem like real people, with real personalities. Keep writing, it's good. =D

Nice story. Your computers are developing real personalities. They all have their strengths and flaws, which is really good. Keep writing, this is a pretty interesting story.

that PC was such a jerk to that sweet Mac.

I really enjoyed this story, and the way you make the computers mimic humans and real life. I hope there will be more to read soon.