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| Penwielder 2008-05-31 ch 14,  | abuseI can't believe I haven't read this yet! All those Eomer/Lothiriel stories I'm addicted to and the best of them all has been here since 2005! Great story. Edmund, hated him then I wanted to jump him. :) BTW my fanfic name is Shana, I've hounded you for updates on just about every story you've done. Lol! As always, your stories come alive and bring me into each scene. |
| Tracey 2007-11-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell, obviously your message made this possible. ;) I remember reading this not long after you posted it and despairing just as much at the loss of Rion and at the situation she and Galant are in. It's amazing how well you can hold off grieving when faced with what must be done. Anyway, thanks again for helping me out. This story in particular really pulls on the emotions, and that makes you stand out from many of the other authors on this site and and around. |
| euphorictragedy 2006-07-17 ch 14, anon. | abuseWow... that ended rather abruptly. However, I guess I'm not sure where it could've gone. I would have liked to have read about her having the child and seeing that it truly was a boy. Oh well. I really enjoyed the story though I'll check out any other stories that you post. |
| eyes of sky 2006-06-12 ch 14, | abuseshame for merrick but a triumph for everyone else involved! i cannot wait for the sequel, this was a believable and lovely story :) |
| eyes of sky 2006-06-11 ch 5, anon. | abusenow THAT was harsh...i suppose it was the custom in medieval times or whenever it is. i forsee some conflict between merrick and edmund though! |
| eyes of sky 2006-06-11 ch 3, | abuseidiotic man!! just a shame that her brother had to die as a result of her father's pride. good characterisation :) |
| a reader 2006-05-23 ch 14, anon. | abuseI just wanted to say that i loved your story, i think you write very well and you should keep writing. |
| Michelle Habibi 2006-03-13 ch 14, | abusei love this story! it is the first time i've read anything on fictionpress and i am glad i did! i clicked on the link in your fanfiction profile and this is how i got here! and i already registered to this site so i can read more! -Michelle Habibi |
| Tiziana 2006-02-05 ch 14, anon. | abuseHi,I have been indisposed for the past month, but while I've entertained myself with reading your stories, I felt not well enough to sit up and review. I would like to make that up a bit and just tell you how much I enjoyed this particular story. I loved the character of Lucia very much, and in the end made my peace with Edmund (almost). The end came just too quickly but it is good to hear that there will be a sequel of some kind. I'm really looking forward to it. Thanks for the lovely entertainment. |
| apple 2005-12-31 ch 14, anon. | abusethat's it?? |
| someone 2005-12-31 ch 14, anon. | abuseah...was that like the ending of the story?? |
| Randomisation 2005-12-31 ch 14, | abusesoo good! i luv it! looking forward to a sequel... |
| Lialathuveril 2005-12-31 ch 14, | abuseWhat a shame this story has come to an end, but at least there is a sequel in the offing. I like your Lucia very much, but I have to admit I cannot warm to Edmund after what he did to her, even though you explained his motivation and also hers for forgiving him. He was too sure of himself in the last chapters for my liking. I really would have liked to see extensive grovelling! Or that dog bite I mentioned earlier on. On the other hand you don't just let it end in happiness and harmony. It's not surprising Lucia should suffer from nightmares after what she went through. The water gardens sound interesting and your writing is very fluent (as usual!). Thank you for an enjoyable read! |
| Maestra 2005-12-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseFor such a great piece that certainly was a shoddy ending. You could have done SO much with it. You could have brought Carina back to prove Edmund's devotion or build up the character's the twins better. It's always so dreary when one reads a "sequel" about the main character's children or friends when all we want to know is what happened to them. I'm SURE Lucia and Edmund's relationship could do with a LOT more growing, maturing, and development into the royal pair they should be. As I'm sure you've read in other reviews, you've left us all saying, "that's it?". |
| B.Laures 2005-12-30 ch 14, | abuseIT CANNOT END THIS WAY! There must be more than that! |