I love how your poems just go on, but they still give you room to think for yourself about the idea. this poem is diffinetly one of my favourites. it depicts the two different sides beautifully. ^^ write on!!

Hey! I like it! It's good and its only natural for you to not like your own work, you're worst critic is usually yourself! But like i've said before, you're an awesome writer! so keep it up!!

I like it. ^_^ Awesome work! Well done. Write on!

~Anna~

sis, me like! of course we half the time don't like what we write...heh heh he-...talk to yah later!