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| Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThere's disconnection for you. Sounds something like most 'parents' out there would say... Well done. |
| Needa S 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseSad but a great job just the same. Thank ya for the kind review. God Bless and keep on writing. |
| Rozovian G 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseIt's got a message. It's a little funny, the way it's written, despite not being the most pleasant thing to read. It's one of those things you'd expect to find a longer story about, but you don't need a story to connect to it. It's good. It's also one of those that makes me start every sentence in the review with the same word, which also is a little funny. :) |
| Calliope Foster 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseOh gosh! That was a heart breaker! You don't want anything to do with this person, yet you could not bear losing them. Good work! |
| Princess Hannah 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseYour summary really says it all. |
| Lipstick Stained Massacre 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuselol Why does this sound so much like something a parent would say? I like this. Nicely done! XD |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and honest; well done, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |