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Reviews For: The Ancient Trees
SnoDragon 2005-10-28 . chapter 1
Amazingly beautiful. My absolute favorite line is, "Verdant light and azure shadow." So true! You've obviously spent some quality time in a forest. My only suggestion: maybe have an end note defining "the wood that once was Broceliande." I don't know what Broceliande is. I'm assuming it's an ancient forest, probably in Britain, but notes on the myth and legend surrounding it would make it more understandable. Obviously, just a suggestion.

Magnificently done. I felt transported to an otherworldly, and yet entirely earthly forest. Very well done, indeed.
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