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Reviews For: Kyira's Tale

Myrijana
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseWow... this is good... you've inspired me to post a fantasy story thing that I wrote years ago when I was a mere ten-year-old... after a bit of revision, of course XD

bb xx K.A.
AMildlyPsychoCat
2006-07-28
ch 1,
abusehey gabi! i really like this, it was really interesting and i'm really glad i took a look at it! i normally dont really read the works on this site, but in your comment on my ch.4 you told me to tell you when i updated, and that was a bunch of chapters before! i was gonna email you, but silly girl you didnt gimme a way to contact you! so i thought this the perfect moment to leave you a review of your own ^_^ im on ch.12 and begining to write 13, i really hope you like them it always makes me so happy when i get your reviews!! thanks ^^ ~Kat
mothling
2005-11-14
ch 1,
abuseHm...intriguing. I am at a loss on how one would pronounce 'Kyira'. Kira? If so, the 'y' is pointless, and confusing. Anyway. You describe the action and fighting well; that was very clear cut and easy to follow, which is hard to do. I don't know if I like this so much as your other stuff, I guess, like The Arena, but I like that a lot, so I guess I am a bit biased. :) Keep writing.
Pandion99
2005-11-14
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's a really good start to what seems to be a good story. Hope u continue with this one.

Yeah about adding you to my Favorites list without reading any of ur stuff, I did that like right before i went to bed the other night. I was going to read some of ur stuff but i was wicked tired and figured if ur name was on my favorites list i'd be able to find u a lot quicker.
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2005-10-26
ch 1,
abuseInteresting beginning. I like the story so far. It was slightly unclear to me what exactly a chafft was. Maybe I just don't recognize this type of weapon. (just googled it, didn't find it there either...except on a page that was in German, and I don't speak German.)I'll be waiting for more of this story. The characters are engaging. Chiffon seems like an intersting teacher. I like him, I think. But, is it reasonable that she would be able to defeat her teacher if she's only level one. Is only fighting on her level? Just curious.But very good chapter.The Scottish DragonDoes this mean you will not be continuing the Arena? Just curious.

Wow! Totally just noticed that I had never listed you on my fav's list! Sorry! I forget these things! Well, your'e there now! *Grin* sorry for not doing it earlier!

I commend you on being so open in your faith. I'm a Christian too, but my poems about God I've never thought of posting here. Because, well, they're really personal, so I've never put one up. But congrats to you!
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