I like the feeling of this piece, it works well with my spasm of insomnia at the moment. All I would change is the title. Maybe "metal and soul" ?

Short but said a whole lot. Lovely.

Delicious. I love how you wrote it in such simple wording when the subject is so complex. Great piece.

-Hillary-

sexy very sexy!

It's interesting how it's so blatantly obvious that the poem has more than one meaning. I love the dirtyromance imagery that the poem gives off as well. Nicely done!