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| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 8,  | abuseThis is the kind of story I've been looking for. This is now officially part of my Fave Stories list. |
| Amerez 2007-08-19 ch 8, | abusethat was really sweet. I didn't catch any gramatical mistakes or typos. The story was well developed and touching. thanks for posting |
| PeachCobb 2007-07-30 ch 8, | abuseThat was so amazing! And Alex is freaking HOTT. :D :D |
| Kizuna 2006-12-04 ch 8, | abuseGAH, this was so good!!^__^ I've read it all in like... An hour or so...^^ But my internet suck so I wasn't able to review every chater, like I normally do... Stupid internet... *sigh* But it's good, and I'm putting it on my fav. list!!^__^ ~Kizuna~ |
| cormorant 2006-03-23 ch 8, | abuseHeh, I know i read this forever ago, but oh well. Still one of my favorites and deserving of praise. |
| doesn't matter 2005-12-06 ch 8, anon. | abusei ** love it w/e w/e mushy mushy sniff |
| looloo? 2005-12-05 ch 8, anon. | abusethe ending is too neat. did you just want to finish the story? |
| D.H. L'Orange 2005-12-04 ch 8, | abusewai... whadya mean 'the end'? It can't be over already! Need some more chapters! (Alex is sexy enough to deserve more chapters...and some good ol' angst never hurt anyone...) : ) DH |
| Olliegami 2005-12-04 ch 8, | abuseI loved this, really great stuff. I love your flow, but I think that you could make this so much better if you went through it again and and edited a few things. I know how it feels when you're writing something and you just want to get to the end. No doubt this is a great story, but sometimes the scenes move quite quickly. Especially at the end there, great characters, great plot, now you just need to strengthen it!Have to add this to my favourites, and I'll be looking at your other work too! |
| multiples of six 2005-12-04 ch 8, | abuseAww, that was an adorable ending! Adam was so understanding & sweet.. he really loved Charlie to let him to, I guess =( but Charlie & Alex are together, as they should be! *happy* Start a new story soon! =D |
| Cherise 2005-12-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseI kinda can't believe that even after that perfectly justifyable explaination, that he's still keeping in denial of his feelings. It's obvious they both still love each other, so why in the world is he so stubborn. I know it must've hurt him to find out that he had slept with his cousin, but didn't he realize that the thing with Joyce probably hurt him just as much? And the fact that he was drunk should've said something too. He slept with Alex when he was drunk and had no control over his actions, either. |
| multiples of six 2005-12-04 ch 7, | abuseMigod! It's so sad.. that makes so much sense with the pretend date and all, though.. EVIL Tess! How could she do that?! This is so good. Write more soon =D |
| rodeoclown 2005-12-03 ch 6, | abuseO_o Charlie has a boyfriend?! That makes things more complicated. As for what Alex did...I'm torn. |
| rodeoclown 2005-12-03 ch 5, | abuseAh, Alex, poor guy. Charlie's going to have to tell me that Alex did something really evil to him in the past soon for me to take his side in this. And wow he needs to do something about his drinking problem. |
| multiples of six 2005-12-03 ch 6, | abuseSo that's what happened! Poor Adam is going to get dumped when we find out Alex had some sort of reason for doing it, I think... but I have no idea what that reason will be. Update soon!! |