 i-believe-in-God 2005-10-27 . chapter 1Okay... maybe it's just me and my reading, or the fact that I'm not great at deciphering poems (and yes, even though this was more of a short story, It could pass as a poem! Well, at least in my book), but I have no clue what happened.None at all.But I do know that this was well-written, and that little tinge of mystery adds to it a lot. Even though my blond head has no idea what happened in the story (I reread it a few times, still couldn't get anythign but the gist of it), I liked it a lot.Don't be discouraged by my lack of understanding...and keep writing! You could get very far with this writing talent of yours...God Bless,Sarah |