How come you haven't updated this story in so long? It seems like it could be really good. I hope that you continue it. I hate it when I really like a story but the author never finishes it. Please update your stories soon! I luv 'em!!

Good start. I'm already starting to like the characters and I think you should continue writing it if you have the time and ideas.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE POR FAVER!

Oh ^.^

This is an interesting story; I like it! I can't wait for more!

I'm guessing you're not going to continue this?

That sucks because it's so awesome and I wish you would!

♥'s and X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan

Oh come on. Update please?

Mpreg I like...:)

Normally, I'm not much into M-Preg as I've never really found many good stories of such a nature. But if it can be pulled off nicely--like I think this story is going to achieve--I really do love the concept. However, there are a few grammatical mistakes that made me fumble over a few sentences at times. But, it was nothing too major, as I could still understand it and keep going with the story. Also, some separation between the scene with the disappearance of the cloaked figures and the movement into the next scene might need to be noted more. It may be just my mind at 1:45 in the morning, but for a minute there, I really was confused. Maybe try putting a little '-' on one line down below the line "Trey could have bawled." and then move on to the next bit of action, just so dim people like me don't get too confused. Over all, though, this story seems very nice and I can't wait to see if you are going to keep updating it. Good luck!

LOL, I had a feeling things were goping to get dirty

*Beams* The story's fun! When I read chapter 1, I thought it'll be angsty or slightly dramatic. The second chapter blew me off. I love it!

*Beams* The story's fun! When I read chapter 1, I thought it'll be angsty or slightly dramatic. The second chapter blew me off. I love it!

I liked the mystery you injected into this chapter. And the boy's reaction when he woke up was spot on for someone who was almost killed and came to in unfamiliar surroundings with foreigners "tending" to him. Loved it.

continue

I say yes!