You have some nice images in here. I like the crimson footprint trail, offering a hand to the fog, the smear you have left on my palm, your arms are the maps of your fall (my fave line in this piece), the idea of someone stubbing their toe on a gravestone (kind of unexpected), earth filling the mouth, smoke choking someone's eyes (original). Nice work. :)

this is a really nice piece - really unusual and original... love the line 'your arms are the maps of your fall'. very nice :) thanks for the reviews

beautiful emotion and brilliantly worded. Sorry for the delayed review, and lack of thus now. I'm a bit rushed, too much work to do right now.

ANNA