well said! your absolute resolve is very clear! i like the metaphors

i love this poem, its my favourite. do u still not want me to add it to favourites? nice work open water - you have a real talent for

so incredibly powerful! I love! I adore! I worship!

"What you didn’t know if I grew while we were apart." - Did you mean 'What you didn't know IS I grew...'?

I am amazed. It reminds me of Seether, but it's all you and it's so cool.

Wow. I could really relate to this. I went throught this last year and am now going throught this now. I could realte. its almost as you took what i was feeling and made it perfectly into a song

excelltent job

keep writing

HiddenDisaster

Whoa nice. You have a way with words.

Wow. I'm very impressed! Write on!

Anna