I would change the rating on this.. but i really like it.. very sweet and romantic one of your best & extra points for the fred astaire reference

beautifully romantic...and then to learn its a dream

Wow..this is so tranquil and tender and beautiful.

"Yet, I’ll let my/Breathing show you,/For I’d kill this moment/Clumsily with words" The complexity of emotions felt here is simply exquisite.

Who's Fred Astaire? *laughs* Okay I guess I should go find out. That part went a little flat for me since I obviously don't know him...but nevermind, that's just me.:)

Excellent job, keep posting!:)

Beautiful. Very beautiful. The words were just... Wow. Great job here!

Hand in mine

Is wistful,

Yet, I’ll show it

Not

-There's something so mystical about hands; the connection that we feel to each other when we touch. I think that whole line about seeing the soul through the eyes is so wronge, I think its touch where you can find the soul. The heat of someone's skin can say so much about that person. Like the curve of their fingertips, or the shape of their neck. Wonderful piece.

Juliet.