Beautiful poem!

that was so beautiful! you are a really good writer never stop writing or i'll tell you the disturbing truth about what chicken realy is *shakes fist*

lolz thats one of the best poems i've ever read :)

I -love- this. It's so simple and so perfect. I can really relate.

This is a truly beautiful piece. Keep up the great work.

Short, but your good with the description, keep up the good work.

Wow. Beautiful. I love this! It's so warm, and it makes me feel like... (sigh)

'As I listened to your heart beat'. Powerful line, and really, great job here. (gushes)

Beautiful. Keep up the work.

You cheeky girl ;)

On the serious side you have some nice in-depth imagery that I rather liked. A little too short for my liking but otherwise another fab poem!

Maxay