This was interesting. It pulled me in and kept me reading. The only thing that I can say is that there are a few spelling mistakes. It can get a little distracting, but besides that the story was great. Great job!

Well, my opinion is very much mixed.

First of all, I loved the story thus far and look forward to seeing it continue. The conflict between the Xawseers and the Traditionalists as well as Ayame's appearence in Wurld are both interesting aspects to build a story on. As a previous reviewer mentioned, it does remind me of Escaflowne.

My only real complaint is the spelling mistakes. While I was able to enjoy the story none-the-less, I was a bit annoyed to see many reasonably common words mispelled. While they do not ruin the story, they do drag the story down.

Overall, continue the story, by all means, but please fix the spelling in future chapters. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing a third chapter soon.

P.S. Thanks for the review.

Yes, I like your story alot! This is very good. It actually reminded me of Escaflowne the movie. Great chapter! Update soon!