I can relate this to global warming. It also reminds me of the saying "we don't inherit the Earth from our parents; we borrow it from our children."

Anyway, great work.

This is wirtten really well, I love the flow of it. I can relate where you are coming from with this.

Keep it up.

i like this. this is really good. flowed awesome, and the rhyming was cool. this one goes on my favs. k/w

in memory,shadow