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pyraverne 2006-03-14 . chapter 1
Good emotion and images. Hm... you wrote this before Hannah's death, did you not? "It takes friends away" (or something) That's just scary... You have been through a lot, and indeed faith and Jesus are pretty much what keeps us going. You konw, you already are as good as me, if you prefer to think of it that way! CU l8r! ~Pyra
Jauvas 2006-03-10 . chapter 1
good i need to sing more sorry if this is geting on your nervs

Jesus of Suburbia

I'm the son of rage and loveThe Jesus of suburbiaFrom the bible of none of the aboveOn a steady diet of soda pop and RitalinNo one ever died for my sins in hellAs far as I can tellAt least the ones I got away with

And there's nothing wrong with meThis is how I'm supposed to beIn a land of make believeThat don't believe in me

Get my television fix sitting on my crucifixThe living room in my private wombWhile the moms and brads are awayTo fall in love and fall in debtTo alcohol and cigarettes and Mary JaneTo keep me insane and doing someone else's cocaine

And there's nothing wrong with meThis is how I'm supposed to beIn a land of make believeThat don't believe in me
Anecdotes Of The Arcane 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
X.x saw this one wasn't reviewed, and how I hate that! So I decided to review it. Great piece! XD I especially loved these lines: "It destroys friends,Sometimes brings them together again.Pain brings babies into the world,But also kills them."
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