Teh whoot!

Justus is cuddly ^_^ I can relate to him; I vacume my food down as well. I really think you're handling the whole deaf thing well too, although it doesn't seem to affect him all that much as he can just turn up the hearing aid.

No Boyd? You make my lip tremble :( Come back Boyd! No more sulking!

Domani is pretty understanding ^_^ I would be all, mine! *grabs Justus and growls at general public*

Finally, I think your boys should just all jump each other and make like bunnies. That was my very bestest opinion right there, all professionalish.-cough-manloveurge-cough-

Eheh, hurry and update dear! I will still edit if you want..? Sorry I have been so busy :( If you email it to me, I can pick it up sometime, print it off, and work on it elsewhere..? I shall be online soon, promise.

Love from meh!

Haha, you tease. ^_~

Well, here's a happy b-day review.

This chapter offered some insight into Domani, but it seemed to feel more like filler. Not that filler is a particularly bad thing, it just seemed like the chapter didn't have much forward motion.

Livi

Interesting characters - poor Adjani has a lot to deal with and he hasn't even been fed yet.

(Haha, and I do have to wonder who Justus is . . . )

Livi

I loved the insight into Boyd (eheh, 'Boy') and Dom's... relationship? Is that the right word? Non intimate relationship? Intimate relationship?

Who is Boyd shagging anyhow? -raises eyebrow wickedly- I know who he should be shagging. But not Davey... Davey is mine. And possibly Jade's too. I may share.

I have developed a bit of a squishy emotion for Boyd too.. durn him. He amuses me so greatly.

“And before the thought even crosses your mind, yes I can.”

You know how much I loved that line. But Dom's sentence after that makes me unhappy; what's wrong with Boyd? :( ... I'm afraid for him.. if you kill him so help me I'll whine until you relent and bring him back. -climbs onto his lap- Lurve you, Boy.

I really like Domani! I loved how you didn't just throw it out immediately that half his face was paralyzed. It would be way more natural not to know for a while. Dom sounds really dangerous though.. I am so curious to see who he really is. Personally I would ask him to put down the vegetable chopping knife. XP

What on earth is for breakfast?? You really love to leave me with questions don't you? But that's exactly what a good writer should do; leave their reader with questions and curiousity.

You know how awesome your work is, do not ever doubt yourself.

Luff,
EA

heya. This is pretty cool.
I really, really wnat to know how he decorates his room *grins*
but yes. Please do write more soon, and hurrah for posting! (though im sure your fanfiction is just as good. :) )

Yay! It's up!

Love the length of your chapters, you know? It's so nice to be able to read a decent amount. My chappies always end up on the smallish side -_-'

You know what I loved about it, reference to the edit page!

I read it and it is most certainly NOT horrible! Us silly authors always think our own works are terrible- even though we're repeatedly assured they aren't. Silly, silly authors we all are. ^.^

I'd love to see where you're going with this. You've set it all up really well, and I'll be waiting for an update. You published this two years ago, hey? So are you going to pick it back up or do a rewrite? *stern look* You should you know *grins* I picked up A Softer Sin after a year and am currently rewriting the entire thing. (Not that I ever finished it in the first place -_-')

I really like the way you've created your characters. I like the originality behind Casandia and her cancer. Even if it is very sad :'( I think everyone knows someone with cancer.

Heh, Adjani sounds sexy *grins*. I loved that second last paragraph. "purple plaid bondage pants" wow. Sexy much? Hee ^.^ Huzzah for bondage pants!

But like I said, I think you should consider picking this back up. Often old ideas are worth a second chance. I find I actually have plot when I let my ideas simmer for a bit (le gaspe! A fluff writer with plot? Me?? Oxymoron alert there. Ah ha.. ha... ^_^' )

Here's hoping you'll post some new stuff soon!

*Sque!* Love it, can't wait for the next update. Go TAZ!

I really like it...and I know what Ajani going through...My mother suspects that I'm a lesbian and if I ever were to tell her that I'm bi, leaning more towards the lesbian end, she would probably kill me and kick me out...

You have me hooked. Please update soon, i think it's going to be very good.

Your adoring fan X